Formality Check on English Native Writing Examples

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BAWE 1 There is also the influence of economic factors to consider. Children are no longer economic assets, but are in fact very financially costly, and many women may decide they cannot afford to have children (Schoen et al, 1997). Fears about economic security have lead to more women deciding that children are not a viable option, and that the financial burden is too high a price to pay. Aspirations for certain standards of living may also influence the decision as some will feel that the cost of children would not fit in with the lifestyle they wish to have (Andorka, 1978). There is also the influence of economic factors to consider . Children are no longer economic assets , but are in fact very financially costly , and many women may decide they can not afford to have children ( Schoen et al , 1997 ) . Fears about economic security have lead to more women deciding that children are not a viable option , and that the financial burden is too high a price to pay . Aspirations for certain standards of living may also influence the decision as some will feel that the cost of children would not fit in with the lifestyle they wish to have ( Andorka , 1978 ) .
BAWE 2 Although the service sector grew to replace manufacturing as a source of employment, women were favoured by employers due to their characteristics, and the way they were perceived as more caring and understanding, and also reliable, especially if they were married (Maguire, 1992). This idea is demonstrated clearly by Ashton and Maguire when they say; 'the new service sector jobs have provided low skilled, part-time and often casual employment, primarily for females' (1991, p53). Although the service sector grew to replace manufacturing as a source of employment , women were favoured by employers due to their characteristics , and the way they were perceived as more caring and understanding , and also reliable , especially if they were married ( Maguire , 1992 ) . This idea is demonstrated clearly by Ashton and Maguire when they say ; ' ' the new service sector jobs have provided low skilled , part - time and often casual employment , primarily for females ' ' ( 1991 , p 53 ) .
BAWE 3 The coming of the After having gained some level of access to a computer, the intruder installs a Rootkit, which can help him maintain his ability to access, the hacked computer, help him attack the hacked computer or use it to remotely attack other computers and help to cover his tracks. The coming of the After having gained some level of access to a computer , the intruder installs a Rootkit , which can help him maintain his ability to access , the hacked computer , help him attack the hacked computer or use it to remotely attack other computers and help to cover his tracks .
BAWE 4 This theory is flawed in some ways, an approach such as this leads to people viewing the past in a possibly incorrect manner. It is possible that the past would be viewed as nothing more than a collection of different and separate population groupings only classified by their differences This theory is flawed in some ways , an approach such as this leads to people viewing the past in a possibly incorrect manner . It is possible that the past would be viewed as nothing more than a collection of different and separate population groupings only classified by their differences
BAWE 5 This is in general a very well written and argued paper, it lacks the theoretical 'blurb' that some papers are weighed down by, which adds to it success. It is clearly and eloquently written and Pollards arguments are supported by strong evidence and prime examples, which clearly shows a well researched paper. The examples cover a good range of geographical locations which help to provide the reader with insight into his arguments. This is in general a very well written and argued paper , it lacks the theoretical ' ' blurb ' ' that some papers are weighed down by , which adds to it success . It is clearly and eloquently written and Pollards arguments are supported by strong evidence and prime examples , which clearly shows a well researched paper . The examples cover a good range of geographical locations which help to provide the reader with insight into his arguments .
BAWE 6 The latest of the coin issues in the hoard establishes that its deposition took place some time after 407 A.D. This was the period when Roman rule was starting to break down in Britain and was extremely unstable, and the Hoxne hoard could well be related to these events. This treasure suggests that it was temporary in nature, meaning that the person intended to return and recover them The latest of the coin issues in the hoard establishes that its deposition took place some time after 407 A.D . This was the period when Roman rule was starting to break down down in Britain and was extremely unstable , and the Hoxne hoard could well be related to these events . This treasure suggests that it was temporary in nature , meaning that the person intended to return and recover them
BAWE 7 Cookies might contain considerable personal information that you do not wish to share, could be used to track every move you make on the internet and become a threat to your Internet privacy. Also, such information could be sold to advertisers or other companies, just as mailing lists are sold to mail order catalogs. For these reasons, you may want to remove those cookies. Cookies might contain considerable personal information that you do not wish to share , could be used to track every move you make on the internet and become a threat to your Internet privacy . Also , such information could be sold to advertisers or other companies , just as mailing lists are sold to mail order catalogs . For these reasons , you may want to remove those cookies .
BAWE 8 As a result of an increasing demand for food from humans and the potential for generous economic gain, hunting currently poses a particularly serious threat to primate species. As a result of an increasing demand for food from humans and the potential for generous economic gain , hunting currently poses a particularly serious threat to primate species .
BAWE 9 The researcher did not appear to consider how his own potential bias could occur in the study. Sampling bias occurs when samples are not carefully selected (Nieswiadomy, 1998). It has not appeared to have been considered that two members of the research team invited parents from their own caseloads to take part in the study, thus could lead to sampling bias. When collecting data, during the interview process the parents who were known to the researchers may have been more willing to share experiences as they may have felt more comfortable talking with interviewers they were familiar with. The other participants may have been more hesitant to share their experiences, subsequently could have lead to shorter interviews leading to more variance between the data collected. The researcher did not appear to consider how his own potential bias could occur in the study . Sampling bias occurs when samples are not carefully selected ( Nieswiadomy , 1998 ) . It has not appeared to have been considered that two members of the research team invited parents from their own caseloads to take part in the study , thus could lead to sampling bias . When collecting data , during the interview process the parents who were known to the researchers may have been more willing to share experiences as they may have felt more comfortable talking with interviewers they were familiar with . The other participants may have been more hesitant to share their experiences , subsequently could have lead to shorter interviews leading to more variance between the data collected .
BAWE 10 The quality of a nursing assessment can affect the quality of future interventions and form a baseline for the measurement of their success or failure (Brennan & Gamble 2000). To perform a comprehensive assessment, any medication that the client is currently taking should also be noted (Gamble & Brennan 2000). Ideally a family member or significant other would form part of the assessment information although this is not always possible. The quality of a nursing assessment can affect the quality of future interventions and form a baseline for the measurement of their success or failure ( Brennan & Gamble 2000 ) . To perform a comprehensive assessment , any medication that the client is currently taking should also be noted ( Gamble & Brennan 2000 ) . Ideally a family member or significant other would form part of the assessment information although this is not always possible .
BAWE 11 The meaning of the word research means to search again or to examine carefully and to discover new facts (Hawkins, 1991 pg 438). Because nursing is a practical profession the role of research is essential to developing and refining knowledge which can then be used to improve clinical practice. Nurses need scientific knowledge to help improve their decision making and to provide the best possible care to patients and how to implement that care (Burns and Grove, 1995). The meaning of the word research means to search again or to examine carefully and to discover new facts ( Hawkins , 1991 pg 438 ) . Because nursing is a practical profession the role of research is essential to developing and refining knowledge which can then be used to improve clinical practice . Nurses need scientific knowledge to help improve their decision making and to provide the best possible care to patients and how to implement that care ( Burns and Grove , 1995 ) .
Quora 12 Now, if you were to think of The Big Bang theory, you might wonder who proposed it. The first thing that might come to mind, physicists, maybe even a mathematician. Perhaps Albert Einstein is a common response. And while some of Einstein’s work paved the way for the theory. The concept of the Big Bang (an expanding universe from a single origin point) was proposed by this Georges Lemaître. That’s right. He’s a priest. The Big Bang was first proposed by a priest. Now , if you were to think of of The Big Bang theory , you might wonder who proposed it . The first thing that might come to mind , physicists , maybe even a mathematician . Perhaps Albert Einstein is a common response . And while some of Einstein ’s 's work paved the way for the theory . The concept of the Big Bang ( an expanding universe from a single origin point ) was proposed by this Georges Lemaître . That ’s is right . He ’s is a priest . The Big Bang was first proposed by a priest .
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Reddit 15 At this rate, the first species to ever achieve super powers will be mice, not human, as we keep testing on them. We may inadvertently uplift mices to a new sentiment species one day. At this rate , the first species to ever achieve super powers will be mice , not human , as we keep testing on them . We may inadvertently uplift mices to a new sentiment species one day .
Quora 16 The fuel quality has since improved but is not nearly enough to lower PM levels. The second big reason for high PM emissions from vehicles is the stop-and-go nature of driving in Delhi (and in other Indian cities as well). The only answer to this that I can see is a great public transport system that is cheap enough and convenient enough to entice people to ditch their cars and two-wheelers. The fuel quality has since improved but is not nearly enough to lower PM levels . The second big reason for high PM emissions from vehicles is the stop - and - go nature of driving in Delhi ( and in other Indian cities as well ) . The only answer to this that I can see is a great public transport system that is cheap enough and convenient enough to entice people to ditch their cars and two - wheelers .
BAWE 17 It seems fair to say that the evidence points towards an arboreal niche as responsible for many primate traits. But to be more specific and say what features exactly of this environment helped shape primate anatomy is less straightforward. It seems fair to say that the evidence points towards an arboreal niche as responsible for many primate traits . But to be more specific and say what features exactly of this environment helped shape primate anatomy is less straightforward .
BAWE 18 The ideal paper for your book, as mentioned in our previous meeting, would be a coated paper called Kaolin. Kaolin is paper coated in china clay, usually on both sides, creating a bright white finish. The ideal paper for your book , as mentioned in our previous meeting , would be a coated paper called Kaolin . Kaolin is paper coated in china clay , usually on both sides , creating a bright white finish .
BAWE 19 I feel that this helped me to settle into my new surroundings. I was expecting the management to be more visible around the hotel than they were. As the office was behind reception, it realised that often work was overlooked in favour for a football match on t.v. I feel that this helped me to settle into my new surroundings . I was expecting the management to be more visible around the hotel than they were . As the office was behind reception , it realised that often work was overlooked in favour for a football match on t.v.
BAWE 20 I think cognitive psychology and linguistics are both extremely interesting fields but I don’t have experience doing research in either of them. I have experience cleaning text data for a researcher in I/O psychology. One of the goals of the research was to predict leadership strategies based on letters to the shareholders. This involved cleaning a lot of text. Although I wasn’t involved with the analysis of that text, the research did remind me of the Flesch-Kincaid test. I_think cognitive psychology and linguistics are both extremely interesting fields but I do n’t not have experience doing research in either of them . I have experience cleaning text data for a researcher in I/O psychology . One of the goals of the research was to predict leadership strategies based on letters to the shareholders . This involved cleaning a_lot_of text . Although I was n’t not involved with the analysis of that text , the research did remind me of the Flesch - Kincaid test .
BAWE 21 I will create a hypothesis that reflects what I think about what was going on. I will discuss different theories and apply them to the interaction/experience. I chose to focus on this particular observation because I was interested to look into what appeared to be a 'normal' interaction, to see if I could learn about any underlying issues or influences. This will hopefully help me to be aware of extra issues e.g. attachment or regression in my future practice. I will create a hypothesis that reflects what I_think about what was going on . I will discuss different theories and apply them to the interaction / experience . I chose to focus on this particular observation because I was interested to look into what appeared to be a ' ' normal ' ' interaction , to see if I could learn about any underlying issues or influences . This will hopefully help me to be aware of extra issues e.g. attachment or regression in my future practice .

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